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 Ancient Blood




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  Run. That's the thought that echoed through the young girl's skull. Her breath came out in small, misty puffs. Her feet slapped the snowy ground harshly, bruises forming on her heels. Her other name was called through the dense forest, reaching her freezing ears. She willed her legs to go faster, her arms pumping at double the speed.

 That was until she reached a devastating obstacle that may cost her life.

 A dead end.

 An exasperated cry left her throat, pupils dilating as she looked left to fight. She turned around, only to come face to face with the people who had been chasing her. Immense power emanated from the group, but every single person knew they were no match for the younger nation. She took a step away from them.

 "Atlantis, you know we're doing this for the greater good. You've grown too powerful, and have become a danger to all of society. Come with us peacefully... we don't want to hurt anymore than we already have..." The Roman Empire pleaded with the (h/c) girl.

 "P-please, Atlantis. W-we only want the best for you and everyone else. Please listen and stay with us..." Kievan Rus said quietly, starting to choke on his own words. Atlantis shook her head. She glanced at every nation, and shrugged off her cloak, revealing scars trailing down the young nation's petite body. Greece covered her mouth with her olive colored hands, choking back a sob. Tears fell freely down her cheeks. Egypt summoned her khopesh, ready for a fight.

 "Do not make me fight you, little one." Egypt said sullenly.

 "P-please, we can talk this over and-" Greece stuttered, only to be interrupted by the (e/c) eyed girl's head shaking.

 "The time for talk is over. Every last one of you have hurt me and my people too much to be forgiven. I do not hate you for what you've done. I would be worried too if a new empire suddenly appeared, conquering so much land and creating so much wealth in so little time. Maybe I was a mistake. Maybe I wasn't meant to be. Ever since my birth, I have been at war, struggling just to survive for the longest time. That's why I must leave. Who knows, perhaps I'll come back someday, and the world will be filled with love instead of hate, and maybe you will all accept me for.. me.. As long as my people live... I will live within them.."  she said gently. A bright light surrounded her small figure, as she began to disappear.

 
 China attached himself to her leg, sobbing uncontrollably. Atlantis had been like an older sister, helping care for his country when he couldn't even walk.

 "P-please, sister, don't leave me all alone!!!" he screamed as he held her leg tighter. She petted his head gently. He looked up, tears in his eyes, to see her smiling. She knelt down, and hugged him.

 
 "You will never be alone, my little panda, for I will always be in your heart." she told the slightly younger nation. She let go, and gave them one last smile before fading completely.


 She was gone. The sweet and tolerant kid they all knew and loved had vanished into thin air, due to war, hurt, and pain.... Even through the hurt, she still cared for each one of them.


 Roman Empire broke down into tears. The two had been friends for a while and he thought the world of her. Greece cried into Egypt's shoulder. Gail pat Kievan's back as tears streamed down both males' faces. Britania gripped her staff tightly as tears dripped onto the wood. China fell to the ground, tears continuing to fall.

 To Be Continued
 
This has been on my mind for a while, and I finally had the time to write this down. I hope y'all like this.

Story is mine.

Pic and characters are not mine,
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UL-Were-cat-Michelle Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
LUV EHT!OMG I LOVE IT plz OMG I LOVE IT plz OMG I LOVE IT plz blush icon blush icon blush icon 
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AlfredWilliams Featured By Owner May 18, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Ermergersh! So awesome!!!
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lunarplatinumwolf28 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I love it! Please keep it up!
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ZheAwesomePrussiaXD Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it!
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chasitythewolf Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2015  Student General Artist
Thank you >///<
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ZheAwesomePrussiaXD Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome!
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JapIsBetter Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2015  Student General Artist
Whoa! This is really good! You're very talented, I'm definitely  +fav this!
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chasitythewolf Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2016  Student General Artist
Aww, thank you >///<
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JapIsBetter Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2016  Student General Artist
No problem, hon! And it's true! Your one of the best writers I've seen on this site! :D
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BrOjUsTsToP Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2015  Student General Artist
This looks interesting! Keep it up! :D
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chasitythewolf Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2016  Student General Artist
Thank you!~
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peerzombie Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2015
This... Looks interesting :D
Keep it up :D
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chasitythewolf Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2015  Student General Artist
:D
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Nevermoremist Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2015
Prussia must've helped you with this but poor China no wonder he took his younger "siblings" leaving him so hard. It must've reminded him of this, please continue
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chasitythewolf Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2015  Student General Artist
I'm actually updating it in a few minutes. China's role in this story is gonna be a bit sad, so be prepared!~

Prussia- Kesesesese~ See, frau? I knew someone would recognize zhe awesomeness!~

Me- Shuush.
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Nevermoremist Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2015
Okay and hey Prussia *waves smiling*
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mintopal Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2015
Oooh~ please continue! :)
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chasitythewolf Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2015  Student General Artist
Of course!~
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11AttackonTitanfan11 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2015
MOAR
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chasitythewolf Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2015  Student General Artist
I think I'll update Chapter 1 tonight or tomorrow. Thank you for commenting!~Icon Miketsukami 
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Ok, and your welcome Hug 3# 
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